All Comments on 'Good morning'

Well done. The scene you build is slow and steady, similar to how I’m sure the real experience must have been. There are some wonderful details in the piece that work nicely. “All of you” deftly repeated paints a very arousing image of her desire to completely consume her meal (which is something guys always want in blow job and rarely get). The woman’s knowledge that, at some point, he can’t continue to feign being asleep introduces a touch of reality (no guy could sleep through an orgasm). The end leaves the reader (this reader, anyway) with a sense that this wasn’t a one-night-stand. You can see them afterward; lying in bed, engaging in soft, comfortable pillow talk, some giggling and tickling and, perhaps, he returns the favor before they pad into the kitchen to make coffee and read the paper as their Sunday morning ritual.

seems like the perfect morning to me ... sign me up!... nicely written..

A Glorious Good Morning!

Wow!

What a sensuous and seductive poem!

Enticing and erotic; arousing and orgasmic!

Thank you for sharing this intimate start to your day!

Ahhhh .... a vixen on the lose. 5 stars

This poem is as deliciously erotic as morning sex. One to savor many times. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️