All Comments on 'Good Morning Iraq-Nam'

Strong sentiment/point of view and well metered and rhymed. It just needs a little editing.

"carry" should be plural.

"as circle do full turn?" - Subject and verb do not match.

"For was revenge that you did seek, on he, cannot be found?" - This line could use a rewrite.

It made me cry. Thank you Blue Dolphin... 'let us not forget'