All Comments on 'Green sheets'

of lusty thoughts. TK U MLJ LV NV

Having found you (on 13/03/14) I'm going back over previous poems I missed. This is misleadingly simple and very erotic. The choice words that trigger sensuality dropped, almost casually, though out the piece are well chosen. The rumpled bed a reality, the passion, the raw sexiness, all an illusion. beautifully done.

Five.