All Comments on 'Gypsy Lady'

This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 40,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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We should all learn to dance so freely. Very sensual and smart. Nice work Irish!

On further study, "Screaming cleavage" is a wonderful phrase.

like some of the descriptions here:

~Hips undulate

to the rhythm

of her melancholy;~

thats a great stanza and paints a very complex picture

~Beads outline

lush curves.

Rivulets of sweat

drip into

screaming cleavage;~

I have seen screaming cleavage

LOL

and never seen it described that way.

Excellent phrase.

I think your writing is getting better and better.

Keep it up

: )

pierce the calm.