All Comments on 'half stop'

I like the description of the shape: comma. Very original. The only lines that don't make me want to sing:

to make her sing

in the key of 'G.'

a little poem, funny. almost silly, the way it's ended.

a sure fire toy, for the G-spot. Very nicely done.

little write thanks for the giggle

T_T

Thinking on what Eve said, maybe it's a bit redundant? I love the poem, very very hot and erotic. The "sing G" worked ok, maybe a bit of an overkill as opposed to leaving it in the air, as something one just knows this girl can do, given the poem in it's enteritity.

You know erotic and I love it ~ you got my 5 ~~