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by Netzach

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TzaraTzaraover 15 years ago
There's a lot I like about this one.

The rhyme salted almost randomly through the poem, the kind of erratic rhythm to the lines. The opening and, particularly, closing images are really good. Thanks.

WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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I agree with Tzara about the rhyme. A bit of rhyme in free verse can be a nice touch. Beautiful poem. Very smartly written.

unpredictablebijouunpredictablebijouover 15 years ago
Graceful and well-done

This is really subtle and affectionate. Your language is careful, and you have a nice sense of phrase and description. I'm impressed. I hope you post more work.

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