All Comments on 'Handyman and a Paycheck'

I quiet like your poem.

You have shown us love and devotion

here in this loving write.

Huggs my friend ~!

Certainly one of the best rhyming poems posted today. The rhythm in which it flows is very nearly perfect, and I never felt the message was compromised by the necessity to stay true to the structure.

There's a very present, almost musical attention to the sound of the words.

I can hear Garth Brooks singing this. Loved this bit:

When I said, “I do.”

Did you mean I might?

Nice work, sexy. ~ Imp

Lilting rhythm...sadly poignant but i can't help but see that there is a silver lining to it all. another please?

Hey E,

I loved the poem, hope you dont mind but I printed it off to see what kind of music I can put with it. Ill plunk around with guitar and keyboard to see how twangy I can make it! lol Just kidding! I truly love it and I know a special someone will too!

C

Elvis, you can be my handyman any time...

~Honey

It's sad that so many men feel that way in marriages. Your poem touched my heart . . . thank you.

This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 40,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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