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buttersbuttersover 13 years ago
how cool to see...

...pentameter used so thoroughly in unexpected places!

and bravo for this unusual phrasing:

until I park

My teeth upon her shoulder,

Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoover 13 years ago
This surprised me

in a good way. I had to try it out! Of course, changing the men to women in the eleventh line *Tee-Hee-Hee* Kinda got goose pimples on this one.

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I enjoy caring relationships with quiet, polite, women with open minds and good senses of humour, be it in a longer-term arrangement or just a one off. If you are up for it, I will engage in daddy-ply, d/s play, impact play and other sensual games. Definitely not into hur...

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