by okane_mochi
yes, the moon is so knowledgeable and perceptive about such things. Nicely done.
This poem was mentioned in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. Please come along and join in, we'd love to meet you. :)
wildsweetone
I hope not, WSO has some good advice. I looked at some of work. I guess you may be a musician. You poetry needs work, not a slam, because everyone's does. I think you have good instincts. Ask your self, what is the price of praise?