- Non-Erotic Poetry
- He Came, He Saw, He Conquered
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He came, he saw, he conquered
That's how he lived his life
And when he entered the other world
He did the same at night
His words would dance with the ladies
Leave them dripping with their cum
He came, he saw, he conquered
Not really looking for anyone
Then one night he met a girl
Who sparkled in the night
She laughed, and twirled and came real good
He thought, man what a sight
He followed her to her dreams
And whispered lovely things
Her light spluttered, gasped and sparked
As he sang into her heart
But she was a fickle thing
Dancing just outside of his reach
He came, he saw, he conquered
But with her he let her be
He missed the little firecracker
And searched the skies for her
The other world left untouched
As he yearned once more for her shimmer
One fateful night they collided back
Both enflamed with desire
His heart, his mind, his entire soul
She came, she saw, she conquered
Did he capture his little light?
Or did she end up flying free?
The story continues, but hopefully....
They came, they saw, they conquered
- COMMENTS
AnaDarklingabout 1 month agoAuthorOh for sure! I hadn't written in a long, long time so this was one of the firsts that came to mind when I did decide to write. I might visit this one again some day and make a proper story out of it. Who knows!
DampKittenabout 1 month agoSounds like a time traveler. I like the concept.
The musical essence of this piece demands a more deliberate effort with your rhyme and meter. You might go back and rework it with that purpose in mind. Some of the stanzas are fab while others seem off balance.
Not sure if you want to make a poem 'to be continued'
but I bet you could write an awesome story in prose
