All Comments on 'He steals her purse anyway'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
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"mean streets" is terribly cliche. you can do much better.

DeepGreenEyesDeepGreenEyesover 14 years ago
Powerful.

The last line is a knife.

lorencinolorencinoover 14 years ago
Reality is so refreshing

I think you are very clever person. Your poetry tells me so.

IraniaIraniaover 14 years ago
Sad

story of what we can become. My fav of the day.

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