All Comments on 'Healthy Obsession'

Maybe not traditional poetry,

but quite humorous.

Well worth reading

but is it a poem?

Thanks for the cheer. :)

Yeah, it's not exactly a poem, but it's too short to post as a story.I guess it's sort of a "Kill My Landlord" poem. I saw a commercial for Low Carb beer and I just snapped.

*humps the hell out of the Mutt's leg... hoping to sweet Hell it's the Mutt she knows... wipes away the mousie stains just incase and whistles innocently...

Loved the poem ;-)

Damn you Mutt...

I wish I'd actually read the story before the nick LOL

That was a pisser... or gusher... Mmmmmmmm You know I love to gush ;-)

Is The Mutt obsessed with his upcoming role in King Lear???

I love it! :) Really, this is funny as hell.

How did I miss this? Better late than never. Thanks Mutt, you're a class act.

look lighthearted...you're such a wag...

good lord help me. That was awesome, made me hungry though...

I really enjoyed this. So much so, I grabbed three pieces of bread, spread them with butter and snarfed in rebellion.

Free verse?

Open verse?

No verse?

So what! It's funny as hell, this little bit, dug up from last year's archives ~ perhaps you know of a couple like Mr. and Mrs. Spratt......

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Me? I prefer Wendy's