All Comments on 'Hemisphere to Holders'

- flowing around, over and in all available space within it's container. The liquid that is your two lovers taking on the shape of the universe that holds them. A unique perspective of being together, yet apart. Sometimes, I wish the barriers didn't exist.

here--it's not easy to be clear about such abstraction, but you are very good at it. Your poem reminds me of a phrase I learned in college drama studies--the "willing suspension of disbelief." This is the notion that one can choose to let belief (or imagination) exceed logic so that anything is possible. It's such a poetic sensibility and seems at the heart of your poem. :)