All Comments on 'Her'

by rarebreed21

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sacksackalmost 19 years ago
a poem?

This, to me, reads more like a short story...too short for Literotica at present. Yet, you could extend it, add erotic elements, and submit it as a story. Just a suggestion.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Nice

work!

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