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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
How can one

f up a poem with such a title? Need work or a good brassier.

tazz317tazz317about 5 years ago
RISE AND SHINE

taste the roses with you ears. TK U MLJ LV NV

JonasRobinsonJonasRobinsonabout 5 years agoAuthor
Thank you for your feedback.

I don't mind any type of feedback. Feel free to leave whatever comments you desire. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Nice

Although short, I started to feel a little growth "down there" as I read it, indicating that that your poem touched me where I want to be touched.

tazz317tazz317about 5 years ago
THOUGHTS BEFORE ORDER

then back into perspective, TK U MLJ LV NV

JonasRobinsonJonasRobinsonabout 5 years agoAuthor
Thank you for your feedback.

I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.

bullworshipperbullworshipperover 4 years ago

"an aroma of cleavage" ... great phrase ... fantasies are real

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