All Comments on 'Her quicksand skin'

you are a word master, you know that I hope! The sounds in this poem are as important as the meaning of the words themselves. Bravo :)

has been recommended today in the Poetry Feedback and Discussion Forum's New Poems thread. Thank you for the read!

Angeline

Understating the skin here

Serves to accentuate it even more...

an amazing poet...but, couldnt you find ANYthing better than "dermal barricade"? that felt like a bandaid being ripped off my bare inner thigh.

damn, Im a feedback wuss...Im sorry, it just didnt work for me

xoxox

maria

'there's always paint

to pretty up the picture'

Or paint to create something powerful. You chose the later. And a nice choice it was.