All Comments on 'Her seduction'

by Erin35

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demure101demure101over 11 years ago
Nice -

Why not put it into prose and write a longer story?

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
A SHE AND HE STORY

about being enamored with another, TK U MLJ LV N V

HarryHillHarryHillover 11 years ago
Exacty Demure!

but it was approved ..........read ... Literotica Discussion Board > Main Literotica Forums > Poetry Feedback & Discussion Prose Poem Rejected ... not much difference in the style ....personaly I care little for free verse (although I have used it)

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