All Comments on 'herpetarium'

Your writing gratifies my needs.

however, the overuse of adjectives and adverbs weighs it down and sinks it.

more, actually. I enjoyed this piece and most of your others. I do wonder though, why no one signs their name anymore. I can't be the only one left here who isn't ashamed of my feedback or afraid to leave my name.

Good luck in the award. You deserve it.

~ NJ

the imagery here repays rereading. Another fine poem.