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by Selena_Kitt
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ishtatover 15 years ago!
This is a good image but perhaps a bit overwhelmed with the words. You might consider omitting both the first and third lines also the word 'nervous'(implied by 'twitching').Then again you might consider otherwise.
ishtatover 15 years ago!
This is a good image but perhaps a bit overwhelmed with the words. You might consider omitting both the first and third lines also the word 'nervous'(implied by 'twitching').Then again you might consider otherwise.
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