All Comments on 'High Again'

There are some nice images here, and as I am a fan of occasional repetition, I liked some of the repeating refrains.

But, sometimes we slip into doing it a little too much. And, in reading your poems, I find myself wanting less. Both of these poems hold true promise... but I think that in order to get there, you need to edit and whittle away so that your images "sing" before they are repeated.