All Comments on 'HimHim'

As I have said, I don't leave many comments. I am not good at them. It's my disclaimer. However that said, I had to stop and leave this. I enjoyed movement, the flow of your thoughts as imagery built. Your line breaks, how simple and yet not. It creates an energy all of its own; in my humble opinion- as always. Thank you for sharing. Hope to see more of your work.

Nice. Just a brief survey, but your non-rhyming poem seem to flow better