All Comments on 'His Beard'

This was interesting. I especially liked the ending. It might have read better with "the" in the second line...

"was like poly fill of a pillow"

-Curiouswife

After reading your poem, I now have my own little movie playing in my head. This is what a good poem does. It shows the reader images, instead of just telling the reader what's happening.

Very good. I see what Eve means; with your writing here you draw a fascinated reader in to work out the imagery and consider the meaning of all that might be happening.