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by _Lynn_
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vrosej10over 13 years ago~
You get extra points on this one for brevity and conciseness (I'd imagine this is a skill transferred from other forms of writing). Brevity is often the heart of wit and here it adds punch.
Anonymousover 13 years agoFew lines...
Miss Lynn, there were few lines but they spoke volumes....wonderfully done....Beau
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