All Comments on 'His Submission'

Very nice......Very well written!

Very simple and to the point, yet elegant.

Great job again, I'm so impressed with your writing.

If I could change his to hers, it would be perfect!

A total mind fuck your words can do to one!!!! :) Grinningecko

I enjoyed this poem because I felt connected to it; like I was there and that it was part of me somehow. I could feel you in this.

I like the directness, it is powerful

"I crave it"

"it's like a drug"

"Insatiable"

You're addicted, aren't you?

Very hot!!! Thans for this.

I resemble that remark...*wink*

favorite line....

total mind fuck ! wow ! ;-)

I do like this one, but not nearly as much as the last one. It was entertaining but for some reason it just didn't jump out at me with that wow factor.

You'd certainly have no problem obtaining my submission.

MIstress. This is the first erotic poem I have read that I enjoyed. It also aroused me. I would moan and beg for you.

A submissive's greatest dream is to know that he is fulfilling his Mistress' needs. To bow to your control, to endure for your pleasure, nothing can match such things.

I want to be your sub Mistress. I want you hear me moan and beg

and erotic!

Your poem played with my mind in the most erotic way. It had me daydreaming instantly.

passionate fire burning in the eyes,

struggling, fighting a losing battle,

moaning, grunting as sound of inevitable defeat,

that he knows well.

Submit for her.......

Being a switch I crave to be him too... this is very erotic..I like I alot.. it sent tingles and shivers.... and much desire to be him for YOU..

I did not mean to post anonymously...

I crave his voice... I hear it in my head.... all the time.... it is never enough

I crave for it!!

a wonderful poem mistress :)

Great poem. Nice to hear what the other perspective feels in this moment

I can imagine a sweet surrender to you

I understand your poem and can feel where you are coming from. I hope to enjoy.

I like this poem very much.

My submission

I fight it

But

I know I she will have it

Eventually