His Submission

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I want his submission

His voice

Drives me crazy

I crave it

To hear him

Moan and beg

Just hearing it

Sends me into orbit

The power

Its like a drug

A total mind fuck

Forever fulfilling

My desires

I crave

It is

Insatiable

My lust

I must have it

I dream of it

His submission

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Very nice......Very well written!

Lyqs2LyqLyqs2Lyqabout 8 years ago
Nice poem.

Very simple and to the point, yet elegant.

Arrow0830Arrow0830almost 10 years ago

Great job again, I'm so impressed with your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
If

If I could change his to hers, it would be perfect!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

A total mind fuck your words can do to one!!!! :) Grinningecko

Paul25Paul25about 11 years ago
Feel

I enjoyed this poem because I felt connected to it; like I was there and that it was part of me somehow. I could feel you in this.

HandyBillHandyBillover 11 years ago
Direct

I like the directness, it is powerful

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice!!!

"I crave it"

"it's like a drug"

"Insatiable"

You're addicted, aren't you?

Very hot!!! Thans for this.

BrainsexxxBrainsexxxover 11 years ago
Mind Fuck?

I resemble that remark...*wink*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
thank you

favorite line....

total mind fuck ! wow ! ;-)

dblofivedblofivealmost 12 years ago
I Like it

I do like this one, but not nearly as much as the last one. It was entertaining but for some reason it just didn't jump out at me with that wow factor.

DonovanCraneDonovanCraneabout 12 years ago
Very impressive!!!

You'd certainly have no problem obtaining my submission.

western_firemanwestern_firemanabout 12 years ago
Please?

MIstress. This is the first erotic poem I have read that I enjoyed. It also aroused me. I would moan and beg for you.

PaulBlartPaulBlartabout 12 years ago

A submissive's greatest dream is to know that he is fulfilling his Mistress' needs. To bow to your control, to endure for your pleasure, nothing can match such things.

MisterGuyMisterGuyabout 12 years ago
Erotic

I want to be your sub Mistress. I want you hear me moan and beg

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