All Comments on 'His Words'

by kara1234

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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 9 years ago
AS HE SATURATES MY CORE .......

LEAVIN' ME FULFILLED ......

YET YEARNIN' FOR MORE .......

excellent stuff -5ed. !

JWrenJWrenover 9 years ago
Fulfilling

Greedy for love: fulfilled yet yearning for more. Insatiable you! (Welcome back, by the way- you "Paused" a long time.)

irishkeeper39irishkeeper39almost 7 years ago
Passion brewing

Beautiful piece about a speaker who longs for the attention of a man who seems to be previously out of reach. Now within reach, his essence permeates the speaker's soul, igniting new levels of desire. Well done.

NC_CoastalNC_Coastalabout 2 years ago

Beautiful. You should write more!

tominsatiabletominsatiable7 months ago

I very much how you begin, how his words reach out and touch you.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

It moves my very soul 😍

Rj_1954Rj_19543 months ago

Beautiful Poem

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