by raynecrow2
reminds me a lot of Bukowski - punchy, I-don't-give-a-fuck language. Great atmosphere, great poem.
"Every morning
it’s 14 pills
To make me
Like you
And I don’t
Like you"
ah what a line!
something happened about 3/4 of the way through, I got the feeling, wait a second,m this is getting too long. But it might just be my attention span, who knows.
interesting perspective, thank you,
sealace