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by Curiouswife

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ElmerGlewElmerGlewover 16 years ago
The last stanza

is the strength of this poem. I'm not sure any of the rest of it is needed. I think it works well as a poem on its own.

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
~~

There's a lot of feeling bottled up in this poem, between tears and acceptance and rejection and wanting to move on.

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