All Comments on 'How to 'eat' a banana'

Monkey eat banana. Monkey write poem.

What ellipses...I guess I was distraced.

for a banana ? uh-huh.. what an enticing little

number, quick wit and full of luscious flavor to

savor !! ...... I think I need a banana ! *winks*

sGp

Bananas and plums — okay, you have your fruit and with my different taste, I'll have mine. Am with Angeline on those ellipses; would have been better after the first swallow if you'd skipped a line and then put the second swallow alone on its own line.

with a side order of plums, right? :-)

I'm not wild about ellipsis marks in poems and I think this topic is a tough one to do without cliche, so metaphor is a good way to go.

Your poem has been recommended in the New Poems Review Thread on the Poetry Feedback and Discussion Forum. Thanks for the read!