All Comments on 'How To Please Me'

both of your new submissions today and I think you could really use an editor. English obviously is not your first language, and there are many errors in each of your submissions. It is difficult to get into what you are trying to convey when distracted by the many mistakes.To make them stronger pieces, finding someone to help you with your english before posting would be a good thing!Thanks for sharing and best of luck to you and any future submissions!