All Comments on 'Howl'

Wolfen porn with a Ginsberg title, Why bother? I doubt you would want anything further.

I didn't vote,

I don't get the point of this layout which is distracting and there are far too many as he/she did this that and the other, 8 as hes/4 as shes (2 of those in the same 4 line stanza!)

Apart from the distracting centralised lay-out, this one had so much potential. The first six stanzas {"She remembered the eyes... .... ...face dim in the moon's icy night"} had me intrigued and then it all went down south.

Much to my own disappointment, I find most erotic poetry sacrifising the mystique, the intrigue, the hint of a nuance, the twist and the turn of poetry in favour of the graphic. Spoils it for me, but it could be my own personal little ghost, so never mind.

Well done! The imagery is wonderful and your descriptions are arousing! They certainly elicited a response in me. The layout is a bit distracting but you seem to like that form so ok. Good work!

This is prose, not a poem. You should have expanded it to a short story and submitted it as fiction. I'm not saying it's bad, it's just not poetry.