by JCSTREET
forget them do we??
Great stuff as always
this:
"shorter ones were breastier
as though God had ordained that they should
be compensated
for never seeing
the fateful throw at the ball game when the crowd
reared up
cheering wildly "
was perfect
Than you Sir
women, love, time, and life, in a torrent - very well done
wonderful tale you have woven here, ending with a quirky touch of irony..I love irony, would marry her if she were a person ;)
last line, perfect--
she had
always liked compact cars.
Your reminisced life
must be a book
collected
cover hardened
published
Please
...I don't even know what to say. That is just breathtaking stuff!! Stunning in flow and language.