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by JCSTREET

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TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
we never

forget them do we??

Great stuff as always

this:

"shorter ones were breastier

as though God had ordained that they should

be compensated

for never seeing

the fateful throw at the ball game when the crowd

reared up

cheering wildly "

was perfect

Than you Sir

Toward A WordToward A Wordalmost 20 years ago
engaging tumble

women, love, time, and life, in a torrent - very well done

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
Very good

Wonderful read JC.

Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
such a

wonderful tale you have woven here, ending with a quirky touch of irony..I love irony, would marry her if she were a person ;)

last line, perfect--

she had

always liked compact cars.

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
"Humping Through Life"

Your reminisced life

must be a book

collected

cover hardened

published

Please

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Oh, JC...

...I don't even know what to say. That is just breathtaking stuff!! Stunning in flow and language.

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