All Comments on 'Hyper Music'

BT!!!

you are indeed a worthy opponent. I just love the way you write. Maybe we should get rid of the six guns and just go have a drink, cause hell, I wanna be on your team. *grin*

this is the best part for me

"Tonight a comet falls and fades on Mars

but you remain in orbit burning white.

Again to stellar song and cosmic praise.

I kiss your lips and soothe your sparkling skin

to tranquil turmoil blazing deep within,

and watch the Libra glitter in your face"

maybe I'm swayed by the fact that I'm a libra, but I loved the imagery.

oh, I liked this too

"and run your fingers tracing ancient scars" poignant!

and of course, you had perfect meter.

I wish I had a man that would write stuff like this for me!! I'd be on my knees throught eternity, I cant choose my favorite part, its the entire poem!!

Lovely! Perks already quoted the lines I would have. Simply lovely. Man! I'm looking forward to the shoot-out at the old corral.

Lovely! Perks already quoted the lines I would have. Simply lovely. Man! I'm looking forward to the shoot-out at the old corral.

Ooops..... 2 x post

All these incredible images and metaphor...

Somehow managed to be worked into such a rigid form?

It's like watching gazelle running down a highway.

These words just flowed so smoothly off my tongue! Thanks!