All Comments on 'Hyperventilating'

reading the short quick lines matched the title, kinda felt like the poem itself was hyperventialating. Very good work!

oh I know exactly what you mean!

best kinda laughter there is!

very nice!

has been reviewed in the New Poems thread at the porty forum.

we would want to see what the laughter was all about. It does leave a feeling of "missing the joke". Very Good.

nothing better than a huge belly laugh.. the kind that makes you cry.. beg for air.. making all your muscles sore. loved it

v~

But it is the kind of hurt that is so wonderful.