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Oldbear63Oldbear63almost 10 years ago
What a great turn of words-

"Not understanding what I have come over,

not over come...

I got a little confused with the tense changes

I hear your bitterness - very well done.

CleardaynowCleardaynowalmost 10 years ago
I like this a lot

I like this the best of your three poems today. It has poignancy and subtlety & nicely captures the sibbling who believes that their brother or sister is the favoured one (it may actually be about something different but that is how I read it). I particularly like that it is not a single note complaint, it does explore the area and feelings

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