by Friend2Pin
"Not understanding what I have come over,
not over come...
I got a little confused with the tense changes
I hear your bitterness - very well done.
I like this the best of your three poems today. It has poignancy and subtlety & nicely captures the sibbling who believes that their brother or sister is the favoured one (it may actually be about something different but that is how I read it). I particularly like that it is not a single note complaint, it does explore the area and feelings