All Comments on 'I am not your friend'

Intimate and at the same time universal.

that's a wonderful talent.

Another great one...maybe the last line...I am not your friend ?

Five.

Thanks for all the helpful comments, everyone.

.....is the best of your three so far. Understated with a nice finish. I'm hooked, looking for more.

Tess

turn from the title; at the end. Nicely done. Consider "I wish it was otherwise" NW score5

i like the lack of punctuation in this. would be tempted to take the last period out.