by CafeExtreme
The anonymous comment before this comment is absurd. Perhaps it elicits such an mean-spirited reaction because it is a little too close to home for the comfort of this anonymous wiseacre. I don't understand why people don't just ignore poems they don't like. <br><br>
This poem is well-crafted though the topic holds marginal interest for me. It certainly doesn't deserve the zero rating
I don't read LW, but I thought this was great. I especially love the misspelled word! Nice touch.
If you did the anonymous comment, it is a brilliant coda to the poem. None the less it was lots of fun and I loved the line "Men endowered"
Even if it isn't, it is a GREAT poem. There is nothing less interesting than some TROLL telling me why what I like is evil and bad ungrammatical and poorly punctuated..
Perhaps you are one of the Billy Goats Gruff didn't they kill the TROLL under the bridge>
I haven't written a Loving Wives story yet. Maybe one doay. I've read many of them thoughand seen the mindless utterences that follow.
Well Done