All Comments on 'I Can't Do This'

by Elsie Grey

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
all wrong all wrong

I'm the one that could mess up a wet dream

so I relate to this, my wife (ex) says I'm

to head strong and don't listen and find myself

wrong or messing up ... sometimes grin ...

loved your poetry and you have an attractive style.

TheEarlTheEarlabout 19 years ago
Brilliant

Once again, you managed to capture the moment perfectly. Top quality.

The Earl

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Nice poem

Don't worry it gets a lot more fun, that was just a bad day. Relax. Take time up the slide, relax the shoulders, place your blade, then drive:P You had to drag all his belly around after all....

Anonymous
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