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Maria2394Maria2394over 20 years ago
finally

a self tribute to man's narcissistic nature!! this is delicately/deliberately ( I think) sarcastic and honest at the same time.. good job :)

LiarLiarover 20 years ago
Oh....my

That was a lot of ego on one place. ;)

A good, entertaining read, although I stumbled on some of the more elaborate lines.

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
I found -

- that the second line of the fourth verse had me almost swallowing my tongue. Too many "th's" but apart from that a clever idea transformed to verse.

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