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This:

~no I don't want to kiss you

but sacrifice my sanity there

on the threshold of your lips

where I found a home a haven

forever ~

yeah......that sums it all up

Great work Randi

Thank you

...very nice, Randi. Your work has a soft flow to it that soothes, and your phrasing is clear and pinpoint. Thank you for a wonderful read.

Wonderful work. You make me suffer poet's envy!

excellent...riching worded, beautifully paced.