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by JessGabriel

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grapefruits12grapefruits12about 1 year ago

Another interesting poem. Very nice.

PhiloDaddyPhiloDaddyabout 1 year ago

Life flows into us when we breathe. Breathe deep, dear girl.

Paul4playPaul4playabout 1 year ago

And with that deep breath, Life begins……

onanismaddictonanismaddict7 months ago

Wow... a very powerful work indeed. Excellent.

So very different from your audio contributions which I was enjoying yesterday.

I admire the diversity of your submissions! Powerful...

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I am a voracious reader and I love reading books and stories between all gender combinations that push the boundaries of what mainstream publishing deems acceptable...aka, the smuttier the better. I'm a shy, Southern girl in my early 40's who is surrounded by sweet (mostly), ...