All Comments on 'I knew a Lass - of Twenty-four'

I got my math wrong trying to rhyme: twentysix - rhymes with chicks, dicks, licks, tricks, kicks, . . .

Poetic license.

I was confused as the age of the female and as to whether you had spent 24 hours with a 12 year old, apparently not? The last few words, "lapped and groaned" are a weak point in a pleasant exercise.

Erectus, the first line was suppose to be misleading, but I didn't have your imagination to interpret my incorrect numbers the way you did..

Doubt if there is a better poem to be found on Literotica.

Well done my good man.