by dreamsweet
....good read, Dream.....heavy with reality. Phrasing is excellent!
kinda sad but very sharp wording brought out your point nicely. i enjoy your poetry, i haven't seen you around much but everytime i read 1 of your poems, it catches my attention. very nice read!
Good stuff. I totally like this. You have some great lines in it. And yes, I can relate to some of it.