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AngelineAngelineabout 16 years ago
Very Introspective!

I think it could use some judicious editing and shaping, but it's really good, has some great images (e.g., "tired spice" is excellent).

Your poem has been recommended today in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!

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