All Comments on 'I Mourn The Death'

punctuated with a wonderful alliteration. I love the polymeric plastics leading to plastique... Well done.

jim : )

Wonderfully written

with

alliteration

for flow

scattered rhymes

for

poetic piquancy

straddled lines

that

lead the eye,

the ear, and tongue

and a touch of Frost

funny too after the plastic breaks we burn it and poison the trees ..and us.

there are such powerful writers here ..i see you're another.

this flowed like tears that mourn..~winks~

thanks for the lead to this poem tara, it is really good!! and JC, the postamble is equally as good on its own merits :)