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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Romantic and something more

It was romantic and something more. Loved it. How about you write one poem from Arman's sids.

Another thought use these poems somewhere in the story. That will place it in a context amd give more depth to the story

Indian_PrincessIndian_Princessalmost 4 years agoAuthor

@Anonymous 07/06/20

Thank you for your comment. This poem is based on the story A Game of Chess. It focuses on Armaan's efforts to find Pankhudi who was abducted and is being held captive. I tried to fit this poem in the story but the couple has no means of communicating with each other in the story. Also the feel of the story is more or less thriller, I'm finding it difficult to put a poem in it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Awesome poem to the awesome story A game of chess. I wonder if u are from IT side or medical professional. Anyway after Sidney Sheldon Wilbur Smith Irwing Wallace I have high regards for u as one of my favourite author like above. Thanks..... BF

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I want to become such a great writer and a poet just like you. Your works are very nice , you should publish them.

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My stories are quite dark and intense thrillers, and I put my very heart and soul in them, that is why they are so special to me. These stories are quite different from most stories you find on literotica. The characters of my story have a darkness in their hearts but they ar...