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MsBugMsBugabout 17 years ago
I really

love the line:

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"as if a new color of pain were invented"

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Nicely done.

4degrees4degreesabout 17 years ago
slaves to inertia

is just one of those lines, that i wish i'd thought of.

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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Excellent work on this with some fine phrasing, all seemingly brought on by an image-inspired flash player set lose in the mind.

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