All Comments on 'I Walk'

....and heart felt. The rhyming occurs without jarring. It's very difficult to write rhyme into emotional poetry without lightening the mood, Mutt manages t here. Well done. Recommended.

This is so heartfelt, spare but raw and its simplicity lends to the elegiac tone.

*cries*

exceptional

after done reading, notice the breakout from the I in the front of the line - the structure change - very well done

5ed

A ballad form that conveys heartbreak so poignantly ........ well done!

Why is the poem have nothing about walking if that's the title? This is a serious inquiry... I love your work.