All Comments on 'I want ...'

I like this Art. The line breaks enhance the feel of the poem, kind of disjointed, but surprisingly surreal. Thanks :)

what you really really want..

Guess you did. :) This was very nice. Clever and well balanced poem.

A clever honest moment.. Art when I read this the works of S. Dali flew into my mind.. the layers of a human essence laid out in a dream world state while living in a moment of earthly reality...

nice work my friend..

Du~

very wow...thank you!