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Click hereI want to taste that peach Against my lips.
Feel the flesh
against my fingertips.
Drown in sweetness
against my tongue.
Won't you say
you'll have some.
I'm feeling so restless.
I'm feeling so weak.
I think I need
something to drink.
Something creamy
That tastes so right.
Won't you be
My delight tonight?
Come on start the fire.
Let it take hold.
Wont you help me feel
Not so cold.
Me between you
Will feel so right.
I want to be
your delight tonight.
I can't speak for tomorrow
or what the future holds.
But for tonight
Let's make the stars unfold.
I want to drown in sweetness
Against my tongue.
Wont you say
I can have some.
So take me home together.
together tonight?
I promise things
will be alright.
Drinking something creamy
That tastes so fine.
Let me be
Your sweet wine
Tonight.
"Come on start the fire." is very trite, can't you do better?
"I can't speak for tomorrow
or what the future holds.
But for tonight
Let's make the stars unfold."--Really, OMG is that crap?
"Let me be Your sweet wine" should probably be "Won't you be my sweet wine"? if it's his cock cum you're craving to swallow...
Oh who cares, just forget my comments. I forgot,never criticize a gal poet who swallows, it's really a great poem and I'm a terrible critic, forgive me.