I want to taste; (That peach.)

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Someone convincing a couple to take them home to play.
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I want to taste that peach Against my lips.
Feel the flesh
against my fingertips.
 
 Drown in sweetness
 against my tongue.
  Won't you say
  you'll have some.
  
I'm feeling so restless.
 I'm feeling so weak.
  I think I need
  something to drink.
  
 Something creamy
 That tastes so right.
  Won't you be
 My delight tonight?
 

Come on start the fire.
Let it take hold.
Wont you help me feel
Not so cold.

Me between you
 Will feel so right.
I want to be
your delight tonight.

I can't speak for tomorrow
or what the future holds.
But for tonight
Let's make the stars unfold.

I want to drown in sweetness
Against my tongue.
Wont you say
I can have some.

So take me home together.

together tonight?

I promise things
will be alright.

Drinking something creamy
That tastes so fine.
Let me be
Your sweet wine

Tonight.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Love it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
a rather confused exposition which if I understand is a blow job poem

"Come on start the fire." is very trite, can't you do better?

"I can't speak for tomorrow

or what the future holds.

But for tonight

Let's make the stars unfold."--Really, OMG is that crap?

"Let me be Your sweet wine" should probably be "Won't you be my sweet wine"? if it's his cock cum you're craving to swallow...

Oh who cares, just forget my comments. I forgot,never criticize a gal poet who swallows, it's really a great poem and I'm a terrible critic, forgive me.